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TheWattman#7460Junior MemberEarth´s core... doing things you will never know aboutRegistered UsersPosts: 1,580
With the voting seemingly coming to an end, the score looks to be a convincing win for Kairos Fateweaver with 10 votes against Skarbrand's 5! The forces of Tzeentch stand triumphant for now!
With the voting seemingly coming to an end, the score looks to be a convincing win for Kairos Fateweaver with 10 votes against Skarbrand's 5! The forces of Tzeentch stand triumphant for now!
If I am allowed to offer hopefully constructive feedback, I'd make Kairos's rap more... complex. Simple AABB rhymes don't seem very Tzeentchian to me, maybe also try stuff like ABAB or ABBA. Would it be possible for lines to be part of several different rhymes. Also the texts/burns going fom future to past or responses to lines not yet uttered might be interesting.
If I am allowed to offer hopefully constructive feedback, I'd make Kairos's rap more... complex. Simple AABB rhymes don't seem very Tzeentchian to me, maybe also try stuff like ABAB or ABBA. Would it be possible for lines to be part of several different rhymes. Also the texts/burns going fom future to past or responses to lines not yet uttered might be interesting.
Will consider if I do further Tzeentch ones in future
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You ask so nicely.
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1 · Disagree 1AgreeNurgle is love
Nurgle is life
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Nurgle is life
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2 · Disagree 2AgreePS Kairos bodied him with the Change Rain like Michael Bay line
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4 · Disagree 4AgreeIf I am allowed to offer hopefully constructive feedback, I'd make Kairos's rap more... complex.
Simple AABB rhymes don't seem very Tzeentchian to me, maybe also try stuff like ABAB or ABBA. Would it be possible for lines to be part of several different rhymes. Also the texts/burns going fom future to past or responses to lines not yet uttered might be interesting.
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